General Comments:
Posters
- Purple rubbish isn't clear as to what it is
- Rubbish expressions could be more angry
- Try different alignments of text (centre would be better as the composition is so centred)
- Background colour?
Brochure
- Consider size and placement of text
- Add hierarchy to text
- Middle pages need work in terms of information
- Make rubbish angry rather than sad
- Hero in centre is too angry looking
- Look at colours as the bright shades and pastel tones are in a bit of conflict
- The seal could be in the centre pages scene as well so that when you half-open the brochure he has a backend!
Website & Third Item
- Good so far - definitely relating to kids!
- Website needs more work
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