Put more info for parents on flyer
Take characters out of circles and make them bigger
Make the logos bigger
Look at the composition of text
Posters:
Dots could be smaller
Get rid of ‘and’ on poster
"Become a beach hero, clean-up Lyall Bay"
Change extra info to plain sans serif font from website
Play around with body copy text
Look at the visual flow
Certificate:
Put fake name certificate
Put animals on certificate
Play with colours (convert RGB to CMYK)
Look at making the composition more exciting
Could bring in aspects from the website
Website:
Sign up should be after kids page
BH logo on Mission Page is fuzzy
Animals are fuzzy
Animal circles could overlap to add depth
Look at making animal quotes more interesting
Make LYC logo bigger in top left on every page
Make the shapes more punchy like ‘YES’
Make the numbers smaller
First sub-heading on kids page doesn't read well
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