W3S1: Class - Interim Critique

- Pretty straightforward, which is good for kids.
- Would also appeal to adults who would want to take their children to it.
- Colours work well for target audience.
- Superhero is good because it's not a recognisable character plus it's a child so it's more relatable.
- Text is a bit hard to read because of the dotted line.
- Like the bottom font best, so play with other more fun fonts like this.
- Look at FDP's like scale etc.

- Like the exercise book look as it relates to children.
- Need to look at colour.
- Could try and make it look like it's been coloured with colouring pencils.
- Make character bigger/the focal point.
 - Superhero is good because it's not a recognisable character plus it's a child so it's more relatable.

- Definitely needs colour to appeal to kids.
- Rubbish should be something that kids recognise/resonates with them/they might use and throw away.
- Copy needs work, consider weight, font etc.
- People don't get the idea as quickly as the other two posters.

All three have good potential - so keep working on them all :)